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if i were a star, id shine brighter than the others.
if i had wings, i would lift off the ground.
if i had fins, i would swim through my fears.
if i could float, i would prance through the air.
if i were a flame, i would light the torch of hope.
if i could make my drawings come to life, i'd live in my own world.
i could do all these things..
but i have not recieved such a power...
- by DJ Pure darkness |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/24/2009 |
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- Title: if i..
- Artist: DJ Pure darkness
- Description: just something i randomely wrote up,give me your opinions and what you think about it please
- Date: 10/24/2009
- Tags: power
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Pollyur - 10/26/2009
- Wonderful! You can almost taste freedom, but can't break out of your skin to grasp it. The only thing that I didn't like was the lack of proper punctuation. Overall, beautiful poem! 4/5
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