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Shoot me with a Loaded Gun,
And take away my Pain,
Slit my Throat with a Rusty Knife,
I have nothing left to Gain.
Stab me Heart with a Bloody Dagger,
And Gauge out my Crying Eyes,
Rip my limbs off with Running Horses,
As I scream to the Bright Blue Sky.
Cut my body into Pieces,
And Burn me at the Stake,
Type my arms up to Anchor,
And toss me in a Lake.
Just end my Lonely Suffering,
Kill me Here and Now,
But make sure that I can't be Saved,
By anyone's Know - How.
- Title: Kill Me
- Artist: Quinothy
- Description: I wrote this the other day when I was really Depressed. T:> It helped me to express my feelings at the moment, but when I think about it, I don't really want to Die, ALL of the time. So yeah, tell me if you like it, and if you want me to submit more. <33
- Date: 08/26/2009
- Tags: kill
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Mentally Hysteric - 09/18/2009
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I think it's really great! (:
Though it would be sad if that's how you feel all the time :/
You should submit more though, I like your poems >.< - Report As Spam
- Sunafire - 09/02/2009
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Why do you capitalise most of your words?
It just doesn't look too good.
It's an okay poem, it just looks like a lot of other work i've read today. Try using other metaphors other than the normal ones. - Report As Spam
- II Rawz The Stars II - 08/29/2009
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OUCH
its very grim
but for some reason i really do like it smile
i will rate it 4/5 its not perfict it needs alittle bit more meaning like why the hell there doing it to you lol - Report As Spam
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