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I could hear it from down the hall
Her head bang against the bathroom wall
Her heart must have been in so much pain
She had everybody in the world to blame
Her eye's so cold when they look up at you
Death stare like ice when you enter the room
She's in this hell and she can't escape
With red tear's running down her face
She said "look at me, look at what i've become
My soul is black and my heart is numb
Every part of me is tainted
The whole world is tainted
BANG, POWW, KA-BOOM
A gun shot from the other room
Through the door as fast as i can
Body laid out, gun in hand
Cold dead eyes looking at you
There is nothing anybody can do
Except hold her tight
Close her dead eye's
Accept she is gone
And say our goodbye's
What is this feeling so unreal???
This happiness i feel should be wrong
But it's so right
I'm happy that her suffering is gone...
Moment's of such sweet sorrow
Haunting me beyond tomorrow
Her pain has faded
Now my heart is jaded
I can't let go of all she was
Her soul lives on
Coursing through my blood
but that is it
She is gone.
- by Missunderstood soul |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/07/2009 |
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- Title: HER SUFFERING IS GONE
- Artist: Missunderstood soul
- Description: This is a poem about how depression can take over your life, It can invade blurring and confusing all that is real with all that is a lie, Mixing everything up so that you are so confused it literally drives you insane, And no matter what you do there is only one way out......DEATH, People never understand why somebody would deliberately take their own life, And though i can't answer that it still gives me inspiration, so Tell me what you think and be brutally honest
- Date: 07/07/2009
- Tags: suffering gone sorrow pain
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Comments (5 Comments)
- iwillbeatharvestmoon64 - 08/23/2009
- i really loved this poem it was completely brilliant ;D 5/5
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 07/31/2009
- hmmm...3/5. mainly because you're so overly dramatic. Try to avoid emo-esque cliches like "Black soul" too
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- SkeletonKrew173 - 07/08/2009
- I really enjoyed this poem. I thought it was truly beautiful! I loved the rhymes and the meaning. You did a wonderful job smile
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- Missunderstood soul - 07/08/2009
- the meaning is that the girl is suffering, and she can't take it anymore, she thinks that nobody care's so she end's her life not knowing that somebody was in love with her, this person was trying to help her but she didn't know it, then when she died he was in a strange way happy, happy that she could no longer feel pain even though he was now sad he still thinks it is best, and now her soul can live in peace, and he feel's she is still in a way alive through him
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- ClairWest - 07/08/2009
- I really like it. I couldn't find the moral or meaning behind it though expect that a girl was emtionaly in pain and ended her life and now she is no longer in pain but now causing endless suffering to every one else?
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