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if u hold it in,
say nothing,
thinking it will pass,
knowing it won't,
hoping to tell,
but never will,
locked away for good,
unless............u let someone in.
and if u don't, remember.....
secrets can destroy u if u don't let them out.
-MiNdLeSs StUfF
- by twilight_earth |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/21/2009 |
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- Title: secrets
- Artist: twilight_earth
- Description: this is not ryming or phases. its a story about how i turned out, its me
- Date: 06/21/2009
- Tags: secrets
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Comments (2 Comments)
- WhiteMageBef - 06/25/2009
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This could honestly use a major upgrade with both proper grammar let alone with passion and for god sake a ryhme scheme. Also to top it off this poem if called so is if not to a extreme, then to a high standard is a cleche completely.
If you mean to write a 'story' so to say, then leave this to the stories, if no then get started on those Poems and Lyrics! - Report As Spam
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