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Today is the worst day of my life and its true,
On February 14, was the day I lost you.
I’m sorry for what he did to you and I say,
I recall everything that happened on that horrible day.
You woke up with joy, wonder, and hope,
and as the day continued, you traveled down a heart-braking slope.
You saw him and he saw you,
and I can’t forget what he did to you.
You went to embrace him with all your love,
and you looked like an angel from above.
As you ran to him, he turned away,
I wish you never heard what he was about to say.
As the horrible words left him lips,
he made me get very, very pissed.
He said,” I don’t love you, I never had. "
Then I started to get very mad.
You started to cry, and you started to weep,
then my body got very, very weak.
"How can I love you? You cried some more,
"you’re just a dumb, little whore."
I heard what he said and I couldn't believe,
I just turned around and started to leave.
I wanted to him, I wanted him dead,
and you should have never heard what he just said.
You came to me tears and all,
you told me what happened, you told me it all.
You didn't know I was there, you had no clue,
you also didn't know that I still love you.
After the day was over, im glad what you said,
but on February 14 I found you dead.
I’m sorry for what he did to you and I say,
I WAS with you on OUR horrible day.

- Title: To my first true love
- Artist: Coleikins
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Part of me wanted to forget this day...and yet, i cant.
Its about someone that i held so very close to my heart, and someone took her away.
I did not change any of the quotes that were said.
i may be alone...but you never left me. im still hearing your sweet voice everyday, and seeing you in everyway.
Rip Jamie :'( - Date: 05/29/2009
- Tags: first true love death pain
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Comments (7 Comments)
- MelTur - 06/23/2009
- This poem is very powerful. I like it alot, but i would love it a lot better if you used proper grammer and cut out the swear words. That isn't what poetry is about. Poetry is about expressing your feelings through powerful words. Like the others said, it doesn't even have to rhyme. But otherwise, it is very good. I give it 4/5. And I am very sorry for your loss. I know all too well how it feels to lose the people you love.
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- crazy-ani-girl - 06/23/2009
- Zat was very beautiful. Magnificent. I loved it lots of emotion.
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- Random_Hugs_R_Great - 06/01/2009
- i absolutely love it! it has a lot of emotion and very sad. also im sorry for ur lose
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- Coleikins - 06/01/2009
- For SImplycowsXX101, Poems have more than just quotes a "swares" as you put it....you dont get poems at all. They dont even have to ryme. its how the people feel, and what they get out. In just a few lines, someone can make you cry, laugh, feel hate..anything...poems my dear, can have anything at all...
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- aslenna - 05/31/2009
- this poem actually made me start to cry. i loved some one too but i don't know what i did to make him leave, hate me and say awful things about me that isn't true... great poem.
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- Potter_freak_on_a_leash - 05/29/2009
- Not really a poem. poems dont have quotes or swares. it needs more powerful vocabublary. but i like it alot. I love the message it brings. its powerful. you really put alot of emotions in it. :]
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- Lady_Sooth - 05/29/2009
- I have no words, but only that I feel the loss in you, the same as I feel the loss in me. We feel more pain than many, but we have been gifted with more love than anyone as well. Keep on keepin' on. In honor of our fallen.
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