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There truly is no love as love divine,
with her I've been in love with all my life
and some day I hope to call her mine.
perhaps one day to be husband and wife.
I sit in my room and curse my bad luck,
that I would fall in love with someone like you.
I can admit to myself I'm love-struck,
but it's too hard to ask.."Do you love me too?"
But then I heard the news, from a close friend,
He came up and told me he had bad news
He told me about the crash you'd been in,
"but... It can't be true...No! No! i refuse!"
now I stand over your grave, pain in my heart,
Neer to se you again... my love...Departs.
- by xXxBleeding4UxXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/10/2009 |
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- Title: Love Departed.
- Artist: xXxBleeding4UxXx
- Description: a sonnet I wrote for english. it follows iambic pentameter
- Date: 05/10/2009
- Tags: love departed depressing sonnet
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xXxBleeding4UxXx - 06/07/2009
- Ya... it's all right.. a lot of people ask that.
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- wiggles22 - 05/29/2009
- That's real sad, real emotion. But really good to. Excuse me if i'm being personal. But is this story true?
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- JohnnytheHomisidalManiac - 05/20/2009
- iam now a fan
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- JohnnytheHomisidalManiac - 05/20/2009
- I AM A FAN
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- xXxBleeding4UxXx - 05/19/2009
- ya, i noticed that. i'll change it soon
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- roboslacker - 05/14/2009
- You kind of lost me when you switched from referring to your love in the third person to the second person. But I love the ending.
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- Faebel217 - 05/11/2009
- Tragic and very emotional. I must admit that I felt a little sad after reading this.
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