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Alone
Who am I?
I am nice and smart
But you tore my world apart
When you said goodbye
And all you ever did was lie
You took my heart
F***ing ripped it two
And shreaded it from there
It was already in a million pieces, so what could I do?
I have to fit the pieces back together
And that'll take a while
But as I sit here and cry my eyes out
All you do is smile
I don't cut my wrists
No, I refuse to cut over you
But my pain must go somewhere
But my words for you are few
Alone is where I am
Alone is where I'll be
So leave me now, you jerk
And let me be free
- Title: Alone
- Artist: Polly Odd
- Description: Just another poem I wrote. Comment if you like? I take critisizm pretty well, too. I know it's not my best.
- Date: 02/10/2009
- Tags: alone
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Nah Elle - 07/13/2009
- wow dude that's awesome, it would make a really good rock song, im always writing music and that right there my friend is a winner, awesome job!!
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- tjenator - 05/07/2009
- kewl! although the cutting part is a little out of the whole rythym, and the f**king part disrupts the serene sad mood the whole thing puts on.
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- ll Tears of Joy ll - 02/11/2009
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Are you kidding?
Its awesome!
You are pretty talented - Report As Spam
- xX _56AcE_Babii_14 Xx - 02/10/2009
- wow ur really good
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