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Rage
I am the fury, clouding your mind, as you swing away,
hating the world, heat unfurled, sick price to pay,
Vengeance, justice, deserving of equal claim,
all black of soul as they carelessly maim,
War and murder, unquenchable fervor, devil's stride,
You cannot run from this shame, you cannot hide,
I am the pain, circling your neck, as you struggle for breath,
looking over the broken pieces to find what is left,
Shattered mirror, eclipse the sun, in defiant attack,
when rage consumes, there's no turning back.
- by Cottoncandyocbra3 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/27/2008 |
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- Title: Rage
- Artist: Cottoncandyocbra3
- Description: An emotion
- Date: 12/27/2008
- Tags: rage
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Comments (6 Comments)
- SirynECrow - 04/06/2009
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I much prefer a comment with substance *elbows previous commentors*
I can almost feel rage dripping from the words. Personally I prefer short lines when they rhyme, however this runs smoothly enough that I find I prefer longer phrases. A job well done indeed! - Report As Spam
- iiReina - 12/29/2008
- i love it!! :3
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- x__C r e a m - C h i - 12/28/2008
- Wow i like it <3
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- Bleuraven123 - 12/28/2008
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whoa!! wink
So...awesome description(or whatever) of rage!!
Keep it up... =] - Report As Spam
- Reks S Hatake - 12/27/2008
- =D It rhymes! And it's very well written! Good Luck!
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- whitejade13 - 12/27/2008
- Nice poem. Well i'm not sure nice is the right word. Very well written though I must say. 5/5 smile
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