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I know i had said nothing
I know i said i didnt care
But i know you knew i do
I know you'll know i wish to be there heart
I dont want you to leave
Dont make me cry, i dont want to!
I'll miss you so much
I'll miss you, it's true heart
Dont break my heart
We're bestfriend from the start
I know you feel my pain
Cant stop thinking about you and your name heart
Why does it hurt
To hear goodbye
I want you here
To be by my side
Why is this happening
Wish this nightmare will end
Dont want to lose another friend
I didnt say it but i want you to know, i'll miss you...dont go cry
You hug me and said goodbye
I wave bye as my heart start to die
I wanted to cry then i ask myself why
Why is this friendship falling apart cry
Theres' nothing more to do
I cried out dont forget me
I cried out i'll miss you
I know that there will always be a we cry
And that's the end of it
Maybe we'll see each other some day
No more person like you to play with
Miss you since the day you went away cry
cry Goodbye...
- Title: Goodbye my friend
- Artist: musicbyme
- Description: I know it kind of suck but i wrote it about my friend andrew who best friend just moved and their really tight.I ask him if he feels ok and he said "ya its nothing.i dont really care."But he was all sad and i know how it feels to lose a friend so i wrote this for him and his bestfriend.
- Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: ending friendship
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Comments (6 Comments)
- XxXMr_JizzXxX - 11/30/2008
- i love it that happened to me thoe and my friend hung him self
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- Jenna894 - 11/28/2008
- I LOVE IT 10/5
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- Fajiki - 11/27/2008
- i liked it but i agree with pretty_face, use more figurative and descriptive language, that will make it much better biggrin
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- pretty_face4life - 11/27/2008
- Oh, my bad those are metaphors. Lol. Just liven it up. Sorry to comment again. lol. BTW 3/5 stars.
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- pretty_face4life - 11/27/2008
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I can imagine my best friend writing this. I moved away and we love each other. This is sorta dull, just written from your mind. It is a good thought. Umm, write more descriptive; not in actions, but emotions. Maybe try using some similes or something. Like, ' The pain I felt was an unbearable...' 'You leaving is worse than...'
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- musicbyme - 11/27/2008
- (i wrote this thursday.november27.2008(just remindind myself))please feel free to comment and tell me what you think and what i have to improve thanks guys
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