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Tears are forming
I see you disappear
Their coming fast
Never to appear
Floods are created
The past is left
Behind us now
I try to leave it all away
Throw that all in the back
There is no turning away
I try to stack it in a way
I'm dissolving now
Breaking apart
Parts of me disappear
I'm never whole
You started that hole
You didn't appear before my eyes
My heart is gone
When you left you took it
On with this horrible day
Don't look back
It's too hard
I do it anyways
I can't handle
Streams fall down my cheeks
Into the ponds and lakes
Gone forever
I never knew
It's so hard to comprehend
My hand quivers
I try to speak
To scream
To get you back
Holler your name
I can't tame it all inside
Once your gone
I yell at the top of my lungs
I reach above and can't anymore
Your gone
I'm alone
I wish it wasn't so
I wish I were with you now
A total mess I have become
A total crime for all to see
As I cry
Clutching my side
A dismal
A shudder
Waiting for you
I jump
Into the air
Wind is everywhere
Diving into what I created
The waves crash against me
My body is cold
I don't realize the bitterness
I feel nothing
My aching heart was never cured
The agony I went through but didn't know
My body is lifeless
Soulless
Injured
Your gone
But I am the one forever dead
- by deathbed92 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/28/2008 |
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- Title: I couldn't take it
- Artist: deathbed92
- Description: This is just another poem I have conjured up out of the stew in my brain. LOL. I hope that it makes sense to you. I read this to my sister and she walked away without saying anything. I had shouted out her name, when at exactly the same moment, I got a txt. I looked down and it said, "Cool". I was so happy so now I want you to please leave comments and rate how you like. Tell me what you think please.
- Date: 10/28/2008
- Tags: couldnt take
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Comments (6 Comments)
- deathbed92 - 10/29/2008
- Sorry about the spelling erors. I was in such a hurry to type it because my sister was nagging mi so that she could get on the computer. Again sorry and I am really glad that you like my poem. Thank you.
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- Burning Breeze - 10/29/2008
- Work on your grammar and spelling, and you might make a great poet.
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- SiberDrac - 10/29/2008
- It's pretty good. You had some spelling issues, though (your vs. you're, they're vs. their). Keep writing.
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- lovelysingergirl - 10/28/2008
- ......no word can discribe how awsome this poem is....
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- tksunshine93 - 10/28/2008
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i like it and the length is good
was their any special reasoning behind the poem?
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- deathbed92 - 10/28/2008
- I'm so sorry. I did not know it was so long. LOL.
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