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I never felt
this lonely before
my face seems to melt
'cuz its covered in gore
I lost everyone
that I had before
tried to run
but i was tore
My heart will break
I know I'll die
My life's at stake
letting out one last sigh
It's always night
in my soul
Once was light
but it's my toll
Tears roll down my face
look at me
I'm a disgrace
my choice, not destiny
if I ever get back
Each second is life
so try to lack
life's fitful strife
hard to say
harder to get done
but like day
it thrives in the sun
what about me
covered in gore
nothing to see
not what I was before
all bacause of one battle
it killed my bliss
its my death rattle
all because of one promise....
- by Kaira Angel |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/05/2008 |
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- Title: Broken Promise
- Artist: Kaira Angel
- Description: A boy went out to fight when is dead father said no and this is what met him there....
- Date: 11/05/2008
- Tags: brokenpromise
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Xo_RaNdOm-BiSh_oX - 11/06/2008
- Sounds good i like it's very emotional which is good it shows how you were feeling when you wrote it i like things like that.....
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- lonelyfangirl - 11/06/2008
- its good lik your other ones
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- Kaira Angel - 11/06/2008
- I HAVE ANOTHER POEM ITS CALLED Picture PLZ VOTE AND COMMENT ON THAT 1 2!!
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- Kaira Angel - 11/06/2008
- thx heart
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- tksunshine93 - 11/05/2008
- wow great job!!! very unique and i love the way it flows!!!
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- Kaira Angel - 11/05/2008
- thx!
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- eclecticghost - 11/05/2008
- wow this is really really good =] ♥
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