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Nyah!
I never sould have woke up.
I never should have woke up.
I never should have cried.
I never should have confessed my feelings.
I never should have lied.

I wanted to find that somebody.
But I never should have lied.
Come once again, these pains in my heart.
Come on again. A battle I shall not start.

I've had my fun. With toys to games.
I've ruined it all , it all the same.
I'll choke on my words. And drown down hate.

From what I've done. Through torture by rate.
Left ajar , and left alone. Come to me not spoken.
Come through to own.

Once in heaven.
Yet now in hell. I live for the future.
An not the wealth. I cast apon my shadows.
I throw out the lights. To see me standing broken.

And see no starry nights.
Have shattered , have dusted, have lied come true.
Come once. forever, I lied to you. But once ajar, cannot be shut. I'll live in you forever. In forever I must.

Meh, I was in a poetic mood, so I wrote this, I don't know why. But I did. So have fun with it I guess.


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  • User Comments: [2]
    And you say I'm poetic? I Crown you Queen Pop Empress of the poetic arts! ~gives you a burger king paper crown~ SHU-SHU-SHA!

    comment Baer · Community Member · Sat Apr 02, 2005 @ 06:25pm
    Well, Me, being a famous poet, I say...I'm not all that famous acutally. xd Leah has told me many thing about you. Rather intresting really. I truely am sorry to her of your grandmother. Have you realized, but there are so many deaths on this blasted internet? Leah's mom just died on the 29th from a heart attack. Anyway, all together, I get what your poems are trying to say, but the rhyming, Hun, don't do it. You re use words such as lied. And some of it doesn't make sense. Like, Starry skys have broken. Hope you don't take this the wrong way or anything, I am just trying to help with the poetry. Anyway, with all do respect
    -Anthony

    comment ~The Craven~ · Community Member · Sat Apr 02, 2005 @ 06:54pm
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