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Acino's Random Happenings
Hehe, anyone who reads my jornal must be just as insane as I am XD
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Hehe, and here you shall all see my awful poetry! sweatdrop

The lives I've touched
And those who've been involved in my own
All seem to pale in comparison
With the imprint you've made on me.
How can one person possibly be in love so much
Without bursting inside?
I gasp for breath
While I feel as if I drown in your eyes
Please don't look at me that way.
You make my heart break with ever second,
Every moment you're away
Just to have it heal and grow in love for you.
When we meet again
Make it stop
This burning within
This feeling that makes my soul cry out for you.
Please just let me die,
For surely my life is slipping away because
In the instant you say you love me
Everything stops and fades from me.
There must have been a mistake
I was never meant to go to heaven.
If you ever mean to hurt me
Then please just kill me
And with my last breath
I'll finally say I love you too.
I cannot
And never will
Live without you.

Perhaps I should try rhyming next time...
Tell me how horrible it is and if I should stop while I'm behind xp


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  • User Comments: [5]
    its.. its...brilliant!!!! xd heart whee

    comment Frankin Bob · Community Member · Sat Apr 02, 2005 @ 04:01am
    Meh, personally I think its sucks...

    comment Moonlight Masquerade · Community Member · Sat Apr 02, 2005 @ 05:10am
    Eh' wasnt bad, I mean rhyming would be a good idea-- or giving more idea, we dont know what your talking about. But dont quit its good to write poems heart

    comment Epistemologist · Community Member · Sun Apr 03, 2005 @ 07:35am
    Its good to write poems if you're good at it xp domokun

    comment Moonlight Masquerade · Community Member · Tue Apr 05, 2005 @ 09:02pm
    <center>Another wonderful piece^.^</center>

    comment [Albert Wesker] · Community Member · Sun May 01, 2005 @ 10:51pm
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