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The eyes that never lived, never died, and never existed.
Submitting to the Arena!
If you have a good title for this, tell me!
Here's the description, tell me if it needs fixed.

He slowly came to a halt as he passes you by, the luminous Scythe shining in the little light the moon had to offer as rain poured down. His cigarette's cherry shined brightly, and a breath of smoke slowly blew out infront of his face. He stood there, knowing you were staring, but didn't look back.
His hand reaches back, grabbing his scythe.
He pulls the scythe from his back, spinning his form around towards yours in the needed amount for his scythe needed to reach.. His arm swung with the momentum of his spin, and the scythe makes a clean cut through the air, through your neck..
And in the seconds following, he places his scythe back onto his back, no trace of blood on his scythe's blade. The cherry glows brightly once more, and he walks off.
Your form falls to the side, and your head flopping off and rolling away into a puddle.

*Edit, April 20*


Leonardo Winter
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  • User Comments: [4]
    Good. As for a title. hmm... Reaper? or DON'T STARE DAMN IT!!! XD.

    comment -stoopid genius- · Community Member · Sat Apr 21, 2007 @ 12:46am
    He slowly comes to a halt as he passes you by. His Scythe Luminous in the little moonlight offered through the rain. His cigarrette glowing hot red, a breath of smoke slowly smothering your senses. He stands there knowing your eyes are carefully watching him, but he doesn't look back.
    His hand slowly reaches back to grab the Scythe. Pulling the Scythe he spins his form around towards your head. His arm swining with the momentum of the spin the scythe makes a clean cut through your neck. In the following moments his Scythe is replaced to its rest. The cigarrette glowing with the intake of his breath. He walks off, as your body slowly falls to the side, your head flopping off and rolling away, down the curb of the sidewalk. Rolling through the water, streaming in the gutters.

    The Title should be. Haha what stoopid said.


    comment [OrangeLust] · Community Member · Sat Apr 21, 2007 @ 01:46am
      I like the description, but I think you need a better avitar is you want to wing. Your avitar fits the description, it's just that people in the arena these days are really harsh. d:


    comment x[CheeseFlavoredMuffins]X · Community Member · Sat Apr 21, 2007 @ 03:52am
    Mm...
    Unexpected Death. o.o
    Depressing title..
    But that'd pretty much fit, Leo. x3
    And yush.
    People at the arena are harsh. I was lucky to make it above 5. x3
    But you...
    Best of luck! ^-^


    comment DieTryingXXX · Community Member · Sat Apr 21, 2007 @ 04:51am
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