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*Insert evil-looking smile here*
Look Kids! Emo Poetry!
I'm nothing to everybody.
Just another soul amongst the many,
Lost and dead.
I will soon be forgotten,
And this world will be better off.
I will have left no mark,
No impact of my existance.
Another voice,
Lost with the wind.
Another poet,
Writing away his pains.
Another nothing,
Left in this world,
Trying to find his way out.
Cuting is no use.
Trying to die?
Wont help much either.
Dwindle away in the pain,
Slowly losing my grip
On what we call life?
Yes,
Pain is the essence of my being.
Basking in it,
Taking it all in.
Watching the blood flow.
Giving in to the urges,
I held back for so long.
To weak to fight them,
To strong to care.
Bleeding my way to nothingness,
Leaving this place slowly.
Dieing....
Saying my goodbyes.
Praying for forgivness.
Good bye for now...
Good bye cruel world...


LordStripeyTail
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  • User Comments: [3]
    I'd give that 7/10 myself. Critique from a poet herself, I've been writing poetry for 5-6 years. What happened to your old entries though? They were interesting and very hooking. gonk

    comment Beyond Kinky · Community Member · Fri Apr 13, 2007 @ 11:20pm
    You just don't have good tastes in emo poetry.

    comment LordStripeyTail · Community Member · Mon Apr 23, 2007 @ 02:13am
    i loves it!
    except....
    the last line was a bit.... cliché...
    but it was velly kewl.

    comment Invader the Great · Community Member · Sat Aug 23, 2008 @ 01:24am
    User Comments: [3]

     
     
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