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I used to write stories, but I've stopped from doing so. Currently, I just use my journal for my RPCs, and to hold a few early stories. Feel free to browse.
Legends of the Razgriz: The Death of Vivi, Part 1
After the world had now known him as it's greatist enemy, almost everyone around the world knew about him. they feared his power yet did not know his true nature. many died by his hand because of their stupidity. He kept his face in the bandages that eventually appeared town and ragged but still hid his face. To this day only a few know his true identity. One of which went by the name of 'Saria.' She was the one person who knew the real Vivi, she had seen his face and had been with him ever since he was little. She was an elf and had grown up to become one of the elite fighters. she remained in touch with Vivi, until one fateful day.

Saria had become the best of the best, she had been trained by Vivi and was always taking on the toughest missions, but she picked one too hard for herself. She was taken before the Grand Council for her mission breifing. To her horror it was to kill the Terror of Death, Vivi. At first she refused but was forced to carry out the mission or be exicuted. She hadn't gotten any sleep that night, knowing she had to kill the one person she cared for the most.

The next day she found Vivi in his usual spot. She knew he didn't hear her because she knew his ears were covered and were less acute. She snuck up behind him and pulled out a lance. With Tears in her eyes he impaled him through the heart. With he turned quickly and fell to the ground in pain. When he saw her then her tears he said "If only i hadn't trained you so well, this wouldn't have happened." he then took one last breath and turned cold. his heart stopped and he died.

Saria was now choking on her tears. Yes she had finished her mission but yes she had killed the one she loved for many years. As she slowly walked away the clouds above earth grew a demonic blood red. Vivi's eye that was not covered by the bandages glowed a dark red.

End of Part one: oooooh! cliffhanger!


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  • User Comments: [4]
    wow i really like that one biggrin

    comment dgdggdsgdsfgdsfgdf · Community Member · Mon Apr 02, 2007 @ 08:35pm
    Oh no, babe I can help!!

    comment sueschoices · Community Member · Sat Apr 14, 2007 @ 02:17pm
    Awsome I love your stories there really neet heart heart mrgreen

    comment EpicFail_Woman · Community Member · Sun Apr 22, 2007 @ 06:27pm
    no one says 'neet' anymore lup stare but thanks 3nodding

    comment Vivi the Twilight · Community Member · Fri Apr 27, 2007 @ 08:13pm
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