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~*~Wanderings Of A Lost Soul~*~
My battles, thoughts, opinion, & discoveries
Entry 6
((I'm going to start putting some of my poems on here. Though if I catch anyone stealing these I'll let loose all hell onto them!! *putting it nicely*))

An obsure cloud blankets my soul
Veils of shadows begin to unfold
Gales of coldness infests my heart
Thoughts tumble, rumble through my mind
An electric prickle under my skin
Rage surges within
Vision gone
Waterfall of emotions rain down.

Numbness of senses overcome
A rift in the storm
A blade of light
Cuts through the gloom & gives me sight
A temporary calm
A soothing silence
The eye before the next storm.

I've been told that this is VERY deep. Though some poems that are written from the heart don't always turn out bright & cheerful. How do you think people like Edgar Allen Poe got famous? Ja ne.


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  • User Comments: [3]
    it is deep. it puts shame to mine.

    comment Dragoness90 · Community Member · Fri Mar 11, 2005 @ 07:31pm
    i dont think so.

    comment onime · Community Member · Sun Mar 13, 2005 @ 08:28pm
    Eee...... Me like. ^^

    comment Maxim Gorky · Community Member · Fri Apr 22, 2005 @ 03:05am
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