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Art_Dork
Can you see? ((Peom))
Can you see me
Through this frail skin
Through my mother's given beauty
And my father's blood that runs in me?

Can you see my soul
Dark and Mysterious
So only a candle of light that shows no hope
A center that shows no promise?

Can you see my heart
Black with no reflection
A broken one that was never whole
Shattered like the thin ice it was?

Can you see through my eyes
The bodies windows
So dirty, no color is taken in
The world of lack and white with no in between

Can you hear my voice
So tiny and small
Hidden by the crowds riot noise
My throats golden silence and watery abyss

Can you touch my face
Rough and dry
So unreachable and far, struck with sadness
Dispair and depression come from the feel

Can you helod me close
A thin and bony frame
One so small it's hard to grasp
A body hanging on to the thread of life
Can you give me warmth
My body stiff and cold
It cannot make it on its own
As it falls into the eternal darkness

Can you bring me light?
Unto my own abyss.

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  • User Comments: [3]
    nice. a little bit morbid though.you changed it from what you showed me.

    comment akuma-sono · Community Member · Sun Feb 11, 2007 @ 02:23am
    You're poetry is getting better and better.

    comment ThoughtlessEndeavor · Community Member · Sun Feb 11, 2007 @ 06:34am
    This is Amazing I love it!

    comment Flora_Cori · Community Member · Thu Aug 02, 2007 @ 08:54pm
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