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ok, i was flipping through all these random papers on the ddesk, and i see a paper i wrote in THIRD grade [better believe it....] and it was a rough draft of a story i wrote. it had a lot of spelling mistakes, even though it was corrected and stuff. this is the story (with all the mistakes crossed out and replaced in red)

The hHaunted hHairband

One day I was in the class room , and saw someone put something on a girl's desk. That girl's name was Ali, a friend of my friend, who's not my friend. Ali had a harband that looked like her own hair. It relly really freaked me out! One day night I was in the dark classroom, alone. Suddenly, OOut of all the darkness, there was a bright yellow fussy fuzzy hole, redyready to sallow swallow me all up! I took a few steps backward. It came closer and closer intill until it was a foot away from me! I ran to the itch to turn on the light! The lights went on, and there lying on the floor was Ali's yellow hairband.

hahaha! thats sorta what i call creepy [not "relly"].