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my peoms
I plan to write my peices for all to comment. Feel free to write what you thought of each poem or quote.
Aero Solaris
Aero Solaris

What's that in the sky, so high that the sun is in my eye.
Is it maybe something like a blur or could it make me purr.
As it's feathers drop from the sky gracefully, i try to catch them, it seem to move at my every whim.
As it flutters down closer i seem to catch a glimpse of it with my eyes, shortly it glides before it dives quickly towards me.
I hesitate as i see it coming at me with rapid sucession, as it stop at what seems like an intermission.
The circles i see, it flies above me without a sound to be heard of, save the drops i feel as it cries.
With a sudden shreik of horror it's wing buckles as an arrow protrudes through it's head, falling towards me landing almost on me as if it were dead, not moving remaining motionless.
I cry senslessly trying to force the arrow from the wound through it's head, it's attacker moves closer menacingly.
I hurry with a scream ripping the arrow from the cavity it was ajarred within, the creature moves to it's feet the blood from the wound no longer but a stream.
It's wings flare out and it dart at the menacing creature felling it with but a single blow, it turn and comes to me, oh so compelling.
As i gaze at it, what i beautiful creature it was, aero solaris, it stops a few short feet away giving me a look of farewell as if it was to care for us.
I could not describe the sight i saw but maybe just a thought in my head, but maybe it was really a flying angel called aero solaris.


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    man.. that's like..deep


    comment Robynis · Community Member · Wed Feb 28, 2007 @ 07:51am
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