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HEY!
The second part of my story
Part Two of the "School for the gifted"

The nureses tryed to pry the crying and slightly histarical man off the body of his dead wife, but he fought with them as if he was fighting for his life. The nurses finaly gave up and desided to let him say good bye to his wife before they had to take her, so the nurses left the room locking the door behind them.

"Don't worry, im not going to let them take you away, i know your not dead." Hishiro whispered to his dead wife. " I promise they won't hurt you or take you away from me. i know, i know your not dead, i know it i just know it," he whispered over and over.

"We can't leave the child with him hes gone out of his mind, just look at him in there talking to his wife as if she were still alive," said one of the nurses in a horrid tone.
"We can't do that to him its all he has left of his wife, im sure he will take care of the child well," said one of the kinder nurses. "that poor poor man he's just going through the schock of his wife dieing, im sure it will wear off."

One of the doctors , over hearing the conversation between the nurses walked over and stated in a blank tone.
"I'm afraid he won't ever be back to normal, he's histerical now. And we can't Leave the child in his care, who knows what he would do to her. I think it would be best for us to send the child to an orphaning house, in the case of her father, i belive we will have to send him to a trauma hospitle.

The older nurse looked at her watch and desided it was time to call security to take Hishiro away, so they could get his wife. The large gaurds troumped in and grabbed Hishiro up off his wife with ease, while Hishiro kicked and screamed trying his hardest to get out of their grasp.

The young kind nurse took the baby gently in her arms and carried her out to a car to take her to the orphan house, but what she didn't know was that the storm around them was getting worse and worse, and soon to cause her dimise.

TO BE CONTINUED


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  • User Comments: [4]
    nice nice!! very nice!! *clap* *clap* can't wait CAN'T WAIT FOR PART 3!!!

    comment scared-flower · Community Member · Sun Jan 14, 2007 @ 01:30am
    Good story so far! Keep it up! smile

    comment Ikuko20 · Community Member · Tue Jan 16, 2007 @ 10:59pm
    thanks for the comments peoples

    comment KibaLover64 · Community Member · Thu Jan 18, 2007 @ 03:23am
    awesome.....you have to put the 3rd part soon

    comment loozahs · Community Member · Wed Jan 24, 2007 @ 06:58pm
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