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furby's are fun (until they attack and kill everyone in a bloody massacre)
oh, sadness, sadness...
why these tears?
i do not see
he is gone
act joyfully.
you are free from him now,
you can be on your own,
you can act your own way,
you are free to roam.
so when you are by yourself
why do you cry?
is something the matter?
please tell me why.
i would like to help
in these troubling times
will it make it all better
if i keep up these rhymes?
i do not understand
all this fear and this pain
or why you sit outside
to cry in the rain.
but i will try and help
all that i can
so we can forget
this sad little man.
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yah...sort of good, not the best, but yah...egh, the ending is horrible compared to the rest...hm...maybe i'll work on it later.


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    I don't think that is a bad ending at all. I really like this one.

    comment Shenkai002 · Community Member · Wed Dec 20, 2006 @ 03:06am
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