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Songs! and the random stuff that I think about, and what happens during my day.
Poem in progress... not entirely done ....yet
Do you love me?

Do you love me

Words that cling

Leaving the torment of souls

From which they spring

They resonate deeply

From heart to mind

Causing chaos of spirit

For others to find

Can you trust that answer?

Something put into words

When feelings go deeper

No, those go unheard

For no answer is simple

When love is concerned…



Do you love me?

They are words that sting

Lacerating deeply

Leaving scars unseen

Painful and burning

They scorch the soul

Shattering belief

Tearing a gaping hole

Imbed themselves in you

Penetrate the skin

Then rip your insides back out

Like incisions from a pin

Leaving you on the floor bleeding

And dieing within


Elavine
Community Member


User Comments: [8]
I like that poem but the last lines make me wince. surprised

comment Radiant Bliss · Community Member · Wed Dec 13, 2006 @ 04:02am
i never knew u were so deep...

comment BattleFoxes · Community Member · Wed Dec 13, 2006 @ 05:20am
do those words really hurt u elavine... sad

comment BattleFoxes · Community Member · Wed Dec 13, 2006 @ 05:27am
Sometimes...

comment Elavine · Community Member · Wed Dec 13, 2006 @ 11:54am
crying

comment lilruben23 · Community Member · Thu Dec 14, 2006 @ 12:14am
Its an internal question, the ever ringing torrent of captive emotion that is held up in simple words. Its about choosing to give your heart to someone and having to trust that they feel the same. About believeing that when they repond, its more than just words they are saying. Its about the hesitation and weighing of consiquences that comes from deciding to believe in that trust. Its about fearing what comes of saying that and being rejcted... it really takes some reading into.


comment Elavine · Community Member · Fri Dec 15, 2006 @ 02:37am
i kno what u mean 3nodding

comment BattleFoxes · Community Member · Mon Dec 18, 2006 @ 04:55am
Hehe, thanks Battle ^.^

comment Elavine · Community Member · Sun Jan 07, 2007 @ 04:50am
User Comments: [8]

 
 
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