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X.x.Sweet.Sacrifice.x.X
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A poem, written by me
Do you realize what these pools mean?

A pain that has been taken away

A pain you instilled in me

That I finally got rid of



Now I'm color-blind

I just can't tell anymore

The tears in my eyes keep me from seeing

Whether I'm bleeding red or black



It makes no difference how I bleed

All I know that it's because of you

It could've been prevented

By one simple phrase



Instead you gave me a false hope

Of something that couldn't be

But like a lonely child

I believed you



Thinking of you, crying for you

I wouldn't have grown into who I am

Had it not been for you

Entering my life



As hard as I try, I can't forget you

Your smile, your laugh

Your embrace, making me feel safe

Yet, it wasn't real



You made me think I'd found love

Instead, I'm in a world of heartache

I've accepted this for way too long

It's about time it stopped



I was young, I didn't know better

I couldn't tell back then what I'd gotten into

I still spend lonely nights, thinking

"What went wrong?"



Apparently, I mean nothing to you

And I wish I did

I wish I meant something to you

But I'm alone, day after day



Now I know why I hide everything

My feelings, my pain, my tears

I've hid from fear

A fear of being hurt again



Please tell me we can go back

Back to a simpler time

Just the two of us

Together, one last time



I've cried for myself way too much

I need a new reason, a new outlet

I want to cry with you, cry for you

Tell me it's possible



I've tried to move on, tried to forget

But my heart won't let me

And although I'm hurt

You can make me better



It was obvious, but I've only now realized

I've been longing for something

Something I'll never be able to call mine

And that is your love



I pray everyday that I'll find love one day

Yet that day seems too far off

These words can only say so much

Except "I love you"



This love of mine

Deeper than I imagined

But without you

It means nothing



I need to move on

I need to forget

Trying to mend the wounds

You have caused



I've wasted my time with thoughts

Thinking about what could've been

And what should've been

But it was a lie



I hurt so bad

Do you even care?

I need you

Please, just give me one chance



One chance to say I love you

One chance to prove I love you

I couldn't say what I was feeling before

But now I know






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alannabetha
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comment Commented on: Wed Nov 29, 2006 @ 10:08pm
its pretty good. needs a little work with flow. ^^ you'll move on. i've written stuff like that before when i was 14-15ish. http://sweetprey.deviantart.com

go there is you like. has everything i've ever written. some pretty good stuff but also some really crappy ones.


comment Commented on: Fri Feb 09, 2007 @ 10:36pm
wow, i like it

when did you write this?
and tell me more about what made you write this.
i do like it, alot of emotion there.



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