hello people, im hoping to god someone replies to this so i can find out wether this is a good story line or not, as you know ive been making a manga, i am yet to find a name for my "boss bad guy" but the main character is Matia, of course, so anyway, i still need to brush up on my fundementles of manga drawing, but i only need to learn to draw bodies and ill be set, i can do faces, eyes, hair, arms and legs, its just the upper body i cant do, im also not that good at drawing woman, but hey, ill get better, anyway, my story line is this...
thousands of years ago a god was under threat by an evil force capable of destroying his palace, this gods name was Matia, one day the 'threat' came to his palace bearing warriors of darkness, Matia did all he could to stop them but couldnt withstand their force, the 'threat' had killed him at his throne and sealed the gates to his kingdom, gaurding them forever more, the soul of the god, reborn to a mear mortal. 10 years have past and he cannot remember anything of his past life it has all seemed to fade away into a blurr. 8 more years have past and on his 18th birthday, celebrating by himself he gets flashbacks of the war, a battle aimlessly fought to keep himself alive, he remembers it all, the blood soaked floor, the tinted blades of hell, the face of the 'threat', he now knows that he must travel back to paradise and take his land back, not knowing exactly how to get there. although many years have past and the army of darkness could only grow bigger, the threat has been mortaly wounded, unable to move from the gates of the throne, now burried deep under the earths crust in a system of tunnels, more advanced and complex then anything humanity has ever known.
ok, some of you may not have cought on but yeah, the 'threat' is the main bad guy, you can now see why i need a name for him, i dont want to call him the threat through my whole book, and remember its not finished so dont go making fun of it, any constructive critosism is really needed as you see it pretty much sucks, but your help is....well, heplfull, thanks again for reading if anyone did...
~:Matia Joseph Damian Romanova
Matia Romanova Community Member 
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