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Kyo-son5
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 01:46pm

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	Cherry Blossoms (crappy poem) Cherry Blossoms scattered on the floor Our bodies close together Romance in the core When I look at her I feel like she isnt real I wish i could feel- feel her. Our sight in a blur Her soft lips toching mine But this will never happen This will only be a dream But it will remain a sweet dream <3 heart

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Commented on: Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 02:58pm


	whoa. is this one talking about sex!? lol

Commented on: Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 03:34pm


	omg this is so beautiful ur a good writer heart alley

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Commented on: Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 04:09pm


	I love it. it's really sweet heart ( and what does kia mean about this one being about sex lol!)

Commented on: Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 04:47pm


	lol. awwww this poem reminds me of my 4th ex boy friend!...well that sounded better in my mind...

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Commented on: Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 04:51pm


	lol and i get the meaning of the poem! cherry blossoms as in people. bodies close together as in like holding each other. romance in the core really just seems like the boy and girl is like..um...well sexual intercourse maybe? lol idk about that part and when the sight is in a blur i think it might mean u dont care about anything thats going on at the moment just that the boy and girl r together. and its obvious that they people r kissing when it says "her soft lips touching mine" and the boy only wishes that could happen...well if u want to put this in lesbian or gay perspective then well yeah...um...yeah thats the end of my comment lol. haha. enjoy reading this! mwaahahahahaha! ok seirously now that was the end! lol

Commented on: Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 04:52pm


	lol yeah! and i was telling u the meaning of the poem when u were typing this! lol u basically typed out everything i said.

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Commented on: Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 05:22pm


	That is flippin' awesome. Man, I know a lot of people who can right poems and you are one of the best. But Catie is too.

Commented on: Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 07:36pm


	lol jenny your so weird! Kyo is way better then me obviously! lol heart heart and if this poem was written with me in mind.. i gotta tell ya.. my lips arnt exactly soft lol.. they are kinda dry and chapped.. not much though.. lol.. i couldn't help it i had to put this! xp xd ....weeeellll.. they might be soft.. i havent kissed anyone before so i wouldn't know lol...hehe!

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Commented on: Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 10:32pm


	lol yeah. i think ur lips might be soft. mine are like wicked chapped though. lol

Commented on: Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 10:36pm


	put on some carmax (its a brand of chap stick) before you go to bed.. i put in on and the next morning my lips are all smooth.. but my mouth tastes like the chap stick...lol...........you said wicked... thats a hillarious word! hahahahah!

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Commented on: Sun Nov 12, 2006 @ 12:34pm


	lol i read this poem like 4 times now. its interesting. u should make me a copy of it. please.....lol

Commented on: Sun Nov 12, 2006 @ 02:31pm


	lol ur a fricken idiot! jk lol but i dont think my poem is that good.

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Commented on: Sun Nov 12, 2006 @ 03:49pm


	THAT IS SO SWEET!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! blaugh blaugh blaugh blaugh

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