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What is this feeling?
hola, well im gonna use my journal for my poetry and basically to say what im feelin.........that's it
dying rose
I stay in the corner and watch him
I stay on the wall
He loves me like a sister
But not the way I want him too
I gave him my heart
But he threw it away
My rose is dying
The pedals fall and hit the floor
There is no way to deny this

I just want him to love me
Is that so much to ask?
I don’t want to wait for my life to be over
I couldn’t bear such a wait
Couldn’t he just love me?
Is it so hard?
Is there something wrong with me?

The pedals continue to fall
The raven’s crow is dying
The vulture circles
The wolf, he howls
Why can’t I just run away?
Run away to a place that I can be loved for just being me

The last of the pedals are falling
And time is short
I have little to give him
I can only hope by leaving him my heart will I be able to accept myself
So I bid you farewell
Until the day I return



i wrote this poem for my friend who had lost her heart to her best friend, i hope this helps


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  • User Comments: [7]
    Thank you so much Moni. I feel better. I know that he won't see me the same way but I feel a little better.

    comment Lostinthenightrain · Community Member · Thu Nov 09, 2006 @ 12:34am
    aaaahhhhhh ur welcome

    comment waterfallenrose · Community Member · Thu Nov 09, 2006 @ 12:43am
    i like it heart I sent her an evil message though

    comment Samarante · Community Member · Thu Nov 09, 2006 @ 01:24am
    I have decided that you should read my story. It is on Fictionpress.com. Search for user Lostinthenightrain.

    comment Lostinthenightrain · Community Member · Thu Nov 09, 2006 @ 03:59am
    kk

    comment waterfallenrose · Community Member · Thu Nov 09, 2006 @ 11:39pm
    I have made you another banner. I can't make one for Love: Its a lie. Is it not? cause it is too big. If you want I can add your fave stanza's. Well here is the one for Dying Rose: I adore this poem and banner.
    User Image

    comment Lostinthenightrain · Community Member · Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 06:09pm
    oh my god.....i love this one too

    comment waterfallenrose · Community Member · Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 11:32pm
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