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Thoughts of a wanna be writter my Journal my thoughts what I feel.... and maybe some other things


Rosalie Ishtar
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Not a thought! but a Story: Needs a title.
The night was young and the moon was full as rain fell on to a small sleeply town. The only thing that could be heard in the slient town was the fall of rain. No one saw or heard the young woman with long , black hair and pale skin as she ran through the town her blue-green eyes wide with fear. She ran as fast as possible the woman stumbled nearly losseing hold of the bundle in her arms. What seemed like forever to the woman she breathed heavily as she made it to the edge of the town.

The woman only stopped momentarly then began to run again deep into the forest. She could feel the pain in her legs and in her lungs her whole body ached but she would not stop. The woman weaved in and out of trees looking searching for something. She came to a stop infront of a large tree and a faint smile touched her lips. The woman set the bundle beneath the tree and gazed at the bundle "Please forgive me I hope you sister will as well." she whispered tears filling her eyes she then turned and looked quickly before dashing off again this time without the bundle.

Inside the bundle layed a sleeping baby girl unaware of what would happen to her next. Though back in town on the steps of a small house another bundle was set and inside the bundle was another baby girl sleeping peaceful.

((What do you think? bad good? I would love to hear some suggestions.. oh and please over look my bad grammer and spelling))




 
 
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