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Naki's Thoughts
My journal will be to write my feelings and a whole bunch of stuff that happens to me. I like to dance, play all kinds of sports, draw and sing.
Story- Part I
"Damn, if I get blood on the carpet, mom's gonna kill me (not to mention she'll ask me why I was bleeding in the first place)... You stupid hayou, Urgh!" the young hayou Tamari knelt to the floor, pain throbing in his ribs. Some blood from his side dripped onto the floor, "Great," Tamari thought to himself, "Now there's going to be a stain... how am I gonna explain this one," and all he could do was picture himself telling his mom, "Oh, I was sleep walking when I happened to somehow hurt myself so bad that I broke two of my ribs and I'm bleeding all over, but besides that everything is dandy and you don't have to worry about a thing. Hohohoho!"... "Yeah, that would go down well. I look like a dumn a** and my mom buys it. Sure, right."
Just then, Tamari heard a sound from upstairs.
"Footsteps," He thought to hmself, "That means that mom heard me come into..."
"Tamari," Tamari's mom whispered from the top of the stairs, "What's going on? Why are you down there?"
"OMG, you've got to think of something before she cmes down here.. uh-oh, too late," and as Tamari finished his thoughts, his mom almost collapsed on the floor. She put he hand to her mouth, then she reached out and ran to Tamari to emmbrase him, 'Tamari, what happened to you," she hugged him tightly in her arms like a child with a new toy
"It's nothing... mom," Tamari could feel himself getting weaker now that he was in his mothers arms, able to relax and not having to keep himself up. His vision becoming blurry from allof the blood he lost in his battle.
"Don't tell me it's nothing...," silent tears were streaming down her face.
"Mom," Tamari thought,"I want to tell you what happened, but if I do, you'll get hurt, and ....I .....promised..."
"Tamari... Tamari, stay with me, Tamari... Tamari.......TAMARI!!!!!

* * *

Tamari woke up to sunlight in his eyes. He tried to block it, but when he moved his arm, it felt like his whole body was being ripping apart.
"GYAAHHHH!!" he clenched his teeth. The pain was worse than he had remembered it being from earlier that morning, and on top of that he had developed a headache from the loss of blood. Tamari held his forehead to ease the pain,"Man, what am I doing in bed?" he said aloud. Tamari turned his head to the clock and almost fell over from shock, 'WTH!!! *ouch* IT'S 10:00!!!! I SHOULD HAVE BEEN AT SCHOOL AN HOUR AGO!!!"
Concidering that fact that his body ached like someone gave him a Charley Horse that somehow effercted his whole body and his head was pounding, he manadged to get up and rave his closet to find some decent clothes to wear since all of his good clothes were in the wash.
Tamari's mom opened Tamari's door a crack and asked, "Tamri, are you alright.... Tamari?" she opened the door and almost dropped Tamari's breakfast all over the floor," And just what do you think you're doing, mister?" she asked in an adult way, hands on her hips and that "look" that's supposed to scare you, but mostly works until you're 7 (then you realize that it' just a look and it's nothing to be to scared of).

To Be Continued (I had a brain fart, so post a comment. I wanna know what you guys think of it so far.)


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  • User Comments: [4]
    I like it so far. but in the very very begining i was lost. but i get it now
    it's awsome :]

    comment Thida Fxcking Tragedy++ · Community Member · Sun Oct 15, 2006 @ 04:34am
    Thnkz! heart


    comment Naki-cool · Community Member · Sun Oct 15, 2006 @ 04:36am
    Super coolness! Sounds veeeery interesting! You must continue or else!

    comment Artistic Silence · Community Member · Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 12:18am
    Okey Dokey!


    Shall it be said, shall it be done


    comment Naki-cool · Community Member · Mon Nov 20, 2006 @ 10:43pm
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