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Umm.. this is me... what is it to you?
Story update. {I need advice on a title}
Story starts_


Kaname sat silently, her feet hanging delicately from the edge of the building. Her platinum blonde hair was braided carefully, hanging softly against the smooth, pale, silky skin of her slender shoulders. She simply stared emptily at the deserted city streetthat lay beneath her. No sounds filled the lonely night air, save the desolate, dull whisp of the wind as it brushed along past various obsticles in it's endless path. An almost symbolic grace seemd to surround Kaname, a power, a darkness. It almost appeared as if she eminated some horribly vicious aura, as if she could be the very soul of power, evil, a creature made entirely of darkness.
"What are you waiting for?" A young man called out from behind Kaname.
"Nothing, I just wanted to enjoy the night air." Kaname gracefully pulled to her feet and in a kitten like manner, she walked along the edge of the building, as if tempting gravity to try it's hand. "Why are you not hunting, Kurama?"
"I was hoping to ask your advice on something." Kurama said shyly, intertwining his slim fingers in the cold black mess of hair that seemed to crash patheticly on his shoulders.
Kaname stepped away from the edge and came to stand before Kurama, "It isn't often you consult me, what is wrong brother?"

{Not finished}



OKay, well for safety and moral issues I can't post any more on here, but I will have it posted some where else. If you want the basic plot line I will be posting it in my next entry. But I would appreciate any advice.


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  • User Comments: [4]
    Wow, thats great.. I envisioned it in my head and everything. Wonderful Brittany.. I want more!!

    comment Forever...Lost · Community Member · Mon Sep 04, 2006 @ 04:14am
    There will be more Amy I promise. But I can't post it on here due to some severly graphic parts and a bit of over zelous romance between Drake and Kurama.

    comment [Aku~Soku~Zan] · Community Member · Mon Sep 04, 2006 @ 12:01pm
    OOOOOhhhh.... kkoolio. *big grin*

    comment Forever...Lost · Community Member · Fri Sep 08, 2006 @ 12:53am
    i like your journal very interesting but its great

    comment hatred of souls · Community Member · Sat Oct 21, 2006 @ 04:46am
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