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I got this poem in a chain letter/petition. It made cry. crying

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> > > > >I went to a party,
> > > > >And remembered what you said.
> > > > >You told me not to drink, Mom
> > > > >So I had a sprite instead.
> > > > >
> > > > >I felt proud of myself,
> > > > >The way you said I would,
> > > > >That I didn't drink and drive,
> > > > >Though some friends said I should.
> > > > >
> > > > >I made a healthy choice,
> > > > >And your advice to me was right,
> > > > >The party finally ended,
> > > > >And the kids drove out of sight.
> > > > >
> > > > >I got into my car,
> > > > >Sure to get home in one piece,
> > > > >I never knew what was coming, Mom
> > > > >Something I expected least.
> > > > >
> > > > >Now I'm lying on the pavement,
> > > > >And I hear the policeman say,
> > > > >The kid that caused this wreck was drunk,
> > > > >Mom, his voice seems far away.
> > > > >
> > > > >My own blood's all around me,
> > > > >As I try hard not to cry.
> > > > >I can hear the paramedic say,
> > > > >This girl is going to die.
> > > > >
> > > > >I'm sure the guy had no idea,
> > > > >While he was flying high,
> > > > >Because he chose to drink and drive,
> > > > >Now I would have to die.
> > > > >
> > > > >So why do people do it, Mom
> > > > >Knowing that it ruins lives?
> > > > >And now the pain is cutting me,
> > > > >Like a hundred stabbing knives.
> > > > >
> > > > >Tell sister not to be afraid, Mom
> > > > >Tell daddy to be brave,
> > > > >And when I go to heaven,
> > > > >Put Daddy's Girl on my grave.
> > > > >
> > > > >Someone should have taught him,
> > > > >That it's wrong to drink and drive.
> > > > >Maybe if his parents had,
> > > > >I'd still be alive.
> > > > >
> > > > >My breath is getting shorter, Mom
> > > > >I'm getting really scared.
> > > > >These are my final moments,
> > > > >And I'm so unprepared.
> > > > >
> > > > >I wish that you could hold me Mom,
> > > > >As I lie here and die.


emo


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  • User Comments: [11]
    crying

    comment Phaedroth · Community Member · Sun Sep 03, 2006 @ 11:51pm
    Yesh, i know it's really sad. sad

    comment April 1st · Community Member · Sun Sep 03, 2006 @ 11:52pm
    cry


    comment tenshi_darien · Community Member · Tue Sep 05, 2006 @ 02:01am
    Thats so sad..... crying

    comment VoidScion · Community Member · Tue Sep 05, 2006 @ 04:47am
    thats sad dude crying

    comment NikkiRowle · Community Member · Sun Oct 15, 2006 @ 12:49am

    I saw that a while ago. It is a sad poem thinger. :[


    comment flouri · Community Member · Sun Oct 15, 2006 @ 01:13am
    Wow. That's sad.
    Though I've read it over 10 times in Emails, it's still sad.
    Not sad enough to make me cry though.


    comment `Green Day · Community Member · Sun Oct 15, 2006 @ 01:26am
    sad......but I'm in the same case as Green Day.

    comment Luffysgroupie · Community Member · Sun Oct 15, 2006 @ 01:41am
    thats really sad. gonk

    comment AstroBuns · Community Member · Sun Oct 15, 2006 @ 01:52am
    this is a very sad poem, you can find it in Chicken Soap, the sotries for the teenage soul, or hawever you say the title, it's in one of those books, i already read this poem

    comment Street Nite · Community Member · Sun Oct 15, 2006 @ 01:58am
    crying crying crying crying crying crying crying so sad..so remorseful crying

    comment Cardioid · Community Member · Sun Oct 15, 2006 @ 02:08am
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