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Like a Thought Brushed Up Against a Sigh
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I am the poet who cries
herself to sleep
and with each tearful word
that make the sentences stream
these pages pour as the cold steady rain
the kind that makes you want
to stay in when its looking this way

Long nights just to dream
theres a muddy field
where a garden was
and he was there but
i could not read his tongue

though i got away
he screamed,
I'm stuck out here
my clothes are soaking wet
from somebodys tears

I was asleep in his bed
and as he was leaving, i woke up and said
i dreamt you were carried away
as my tears turned to waves
baby, dont go away
come here

heart to ananda


Enecko
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  • User Comments: [3]
    awwwwww......thats so good!

    comment whiteflamingo29 · Community Member · Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 02:26am
    Reminds me of the last episode of Kenshin the series (not the ova) As for the workmanship, B+ If you would like an ancient love poem to see what others wrote thousands of years before, Read all of The Song of Solomon from the Bible,(it's quite good!)

    comment zadoka · Community Member · Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 04:05am
    one word "beautiful"

    comment Ben The Dutch Whitlatch · Community Member · Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 06:14am
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