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Kyo-son5
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His eyes tell it all
As i peer into your eyes, i peer into your soul.
I see all the joy that you felt, All the happiness you've brought.
But as my gaze deepens, I see more.
I see your pain, Your suffering.
There remains thousands of tears, that have fallen thick like rain,
from your eyes.
Like a storm, Full of your sorrow and fury.
And anger at the source, The Hate you feel to the cause.
And I realize that deep beneathe the surface, Behind the mask
with a broken smile.
Lies a solemn and broken boy, Waiting.
Waiting for his turn of true happiness, and a true life.
One with his true self, the one he despretly wants to show.
Yet that life he hides, and lives hisfalse life.
As the sham of a boy, He tries so hard to be.
And so i end, and break my gaze.
I walk away from the mirror, and slowly walk away from the truth.
Back to my sham of life, Masquerading as a false boy.





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XblindXloveX
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comment Commented on: Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 02:45am
cry oh my god..i am seriously crying......

here's on that i made for my dad a while ago...like last year

I see the Happy Day
and live a sad cold night
i promise you i'll make it right
i did my wrongs
that i regret
and in stone i wil set
the words of truth
the rhymes of lies
and the pain of my childs cry's
to change my ways
to start a new
and to this i promise you
I'll keep you close
I'll keep you dear
Just to see your brightful cheer
my darling doughter
my jewel of light
I promise you I'll hold you tight.



Of course there not as good as yours sweatdrop


comment Commented on: Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 03:40am
Wow.... You guys should make a book of poems...... Your probably better then many of the profesional poem makers......



oO-Lickity-Split-Oo
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x_cryz_x
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comment Commented on: Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 04:24pm
i agree u two should make poems together 3nodding


comment Commented on: Tue Aug 29, 2006 @ 07:47pm
lol we should seriously think about it! 3nodding



XblindXloveX
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Kyo-son5
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comment Commented on: Tue Aug 29, 2006 @ 11:56pm
ok!


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