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Wow, journals are great, but I wonder who actually reads my journals. Hmmm - of course, you say you are my friends, but do you actually know me? Just kidding, I feel great that I have 12 wonderful friends and some who aren't even in my friends list, but still talk to me message after message. Well, I've decided that I should share some of my poetry with you guys. You can say whether it sucks or not, just don't go 1st comment or things like that. I need some real feedback. I'm doing this for one thing because I'm bored and because I forgot my dreams. So here is my lame poetry - at least it rhymes (well kind of).

The time of year is awesome, the moment is fierece.
I can't believe that the school year is starting - hooray and three cheers.
I'm ready and I"m nervous.
I heart this rush of fun.
How long can I hide this feeling although it has just begun?
My friends are right there waiting - in my mind I can see them laugh.
It seems the moment of depression is all in the past.
A room of great achievement is right there waiting for me.
Its time to be serious - to be all that I can be.
The summer will soon be over and the days of play are gone.
The only sun I'll be getting is during a walk or maybe a mile run.

I don't occassionally write poetry, but if you think its meaningful - just comment me and maybe I'll put up more to inspire you. I know some poems that I write inspire me with every breath I take. Maybe it can help you too. mrgreen