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Umm.. this is me... what is it to you?
Story
I'm am trying to write a little story, and I am going to put excerpts of it in here. I'll tell everyone before I start so you can define true from false.
Now for the story:

~*Angel {A young girl}, sits alone in a large white room, directly across from her is a mirror. She stares at it hatefully.
"Just come out already!" She demands futally, as she slams her fist against the white stone floor beneath her.
"Fine." I voice speaks out over a p.a system. A light behind the mirrow flickers and the mirror changes to thin, seethrough reflective glass. A man stands behind the mirror, watching her tenderly, knowing she is not afraid of what she knows may soon come.
"Why am I here?" Angel barked out viciously.
"I'll be asking the questions." The man replied.
"I think not." Angel stood up and came over to the mirror.
She slammed her fist into the glass and upon impact the glass shattered, sending glass over the floor of the rooms.
She reached swiftly and grasped her hand around the mans throat. Without hesitation she pulled him out of the other room and held him agains the side wall of the room.
"Now tell what I want to know." Angel demanded with a smirk.
"You can't kill me Angel." THe man laughed.
"Oh can't I?" Angel tightened her grip on his neck slightly and slowly. Within moments Angel began to shake in pain. She loosened her grip but didn't release him. "What is going on?"*~

That is all for tonight. I hope you may have liked it?
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[Aku~Soku~Zan]
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  • User Comments: [3]
    it confused me confused confused confused

    comment Kawakami_Gensai420 · Community Member · Fri Jun 30, 2006 @ 04:26am
    Very interesting.


    comment Forever...Lost · Community Member · Fri Jun 30, 2006 @ 04:07pm
    It is the second chapter of the story, the first is too gorry to put up here.

    comment [Aku~Soku~Zan] · Community Member · Fri Jun 30, 2006 @ 06:23pm
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