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Madness and Wonder.
Poetry (comments wanted)
I'm not a great fan of most poetry. I love war poetry though. I don't think that my poems are any good, but leave a comment on this one please:

To those left behind
Declared missing, were they searched for?
The letter reads M.I.A.
Men's lives lost in, this un-wanted war,
but worse those left behind.






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forsaken_angel195
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commentCommented on: Thu Jun 15, 2006 @ 08:46pm
Umm, interesting, but it's kinda hard to understand... and it doesn't really sound like a poem... I like the way it sounds though...


commentCommented on: Sat Jun 17, 2006 @ 02:49pm
I like its general gist. Is it a memorial day tribute? When England is suddenly bombarded with red poppies?

I think it's more of a Haiku/Senryu. domokun



Melish33
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forsaken_angel195
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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 17, 2006 @ 03:00pm
Haikus and senryus have only 3 lines though...


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 19, 2006 @ 04:33pm
Nani? I was just doing a short one sweatdrop Most take up 3 verses...



Motherplucker
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