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Midnight Lace
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Midnight's Medieval/fantasy description, and some tips!!
Midnight is used for the following rp's

1) Inuyasha
2) Medieval/fantasy
3)spell and wizards/warlocks/spellcasters/witches.


either way, she plays as a girl that was changed into a part wolf. Now just to let you all know if you are reading this, I am not an ill-literate. As a matter of fact I am semi-literate for my category. Sometimes I act more literate for literate rp's, but the way to do this is simple. Learn words to widen your vocabulary, work on your english!! Also work on how you express certain things, and don't just put simple 3-4 words into one little post!! Broaden your descriptions to give others a vivid image of your character! For instance

Midnight was a tall, lanky girl of 16. She had a light pale complexion for her skin tone, and it is smooth and fair. She had long, chocolate-brown hair that was sort of wavy at the tips. Her narrow hazel colored eyes gave off a sort of evil glare to them, but they witheld a sparkle that would make people smile when they were sad. Her cloak is that of a silvery blue, and she wears under it a red shirt and black jeans. She didn't care much about her looks. She even disliked make up! Not even a dare would make her touch it. She prefered a nice, more natural outlook compared to a more complex, time wasting activity meant for those who enjoyed it.

Now this is not what my character looks like. She is far different, but this as I said before, was only an example of what you can do if you set your mind to it! Nothing is impossible in writing! If you feel like you want to write, then go ahead! nothing can stop a working mind, and sometimes you can come up with a big plot, and off you go into a writing adventure! You never know, one day it could be published!(thats what I hope on my behalf as well ^_^)


Now I have different looks for those certain rp's. But mostly she looks the same in every one of them, and her personality that I created was just developed not too long ago, so that is a new feature of my girl.


for Medieval rp's

Name midnight Seforea
Age around 15-16 years of age
Sex Female
race human, but her history tells off most of how she got to be part wolven as well.
General description a medium heighth girl with long waist-length raven black hair that curls at the tips and is slick and smooth. Her eyes are a blueish color with a tint of violet in them. Her skin tone is a mildly fair and pale complexion, but since she has been in the sun alot more, she has developed a more sensitive skin tone of a darker tan. Her clothes consist of a long black cloak, and hidden under the cloak is a simple plaided dress. She wears a hood over her head, where she has ears and a tail of a wolf. She hates these tremendously, but still she must put up with them, and looks to her past and her curiousity that put her into this mess, and thinks that she is guilty.
background history Long since forgotten by the humans, she shelters herself in the midst of the forest, in a nice cozy den with other wolves. She was only 5 when the king had decided to burn her village of Triodon, and her mother, weary of the fights and running, carried her into the forest. Lying her in a bush, she gave her daughter a kiss, saying something and then running back into the village to protect her loved ones. Midnight, curious as to why her mother had left, began to follow her mother with tiny toddle steps, but she didnt make it all the way. This is the part that she hated the most. A wolf pup had come across her view, and off she went to chase it. Laughing like the little girl she was, she chased it to the den of the irregular-sized wolves that awaited her, and they automatically jumped upon her, knocking her out. A week had passed before she finally came to conciousness, and in that time, she had developed a tail and ears, not to mention the scent and eyesight of one, although she can see in color. The wolves then took her in, and she has been living there ever since, learning the ways of the wolves.

(that was for Medieval/Fantasy, my friends...)

now for the Inuyasha description!!

Name: Midnight Hitoshiki
Age: 18
sex:female
Relations: none
demon?: yes she is a youkai. She is of the northern wolf clan(Kouga's tribe, she was one of the few women/girls to have survived) and she is full demon.
General description: She is a wolf youkai with a blue kimono on that accentuates her figure nicely, and long white sleeves of gold. She has long, raven black hair that is waist-length, and it is tied back into a blue bow like Kikyo's. She has innocent, blue eyes with a tint of violet in them. She has wolven ears, and a wolven furry brown tail that sticks out from behind her kimono,yet she doesnt seem to care much about that part of appearance. She has a scar running down her left cheek, and down onto the neck, ending near the collar bone, of which she had recieved this souvenier from a battle of which she had lost both her left eye and a dear friend, almost costing her life as well.
Weapon: mainly claws, but she is very good with the bow and arrows. her Main weapon besides her claws is her favorite Katana, given to her by her mother, so she treasures it and only uses the Katana when in serious danger.
General History: During the destruction of all of the males besides Kouga by Kagura, Midnight had taken all that she thought was important to her and fled for the deep forest while their terrain was being destroyed. Kagura, angry of the fact that Midnight had taken control and fled along with some other women and children, followed, where she and Midnight went into a full fledged battle, where Midnight protected her clan as much as she could, but only managed an escape. A few minutes more of battling against Kagura, and she would have been dead. All that remains of that battle is a scar on her face, and guilt that she couldn't stop and save a friend that had saved her life by stepping in front of Kagura's attack.





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Tsuna Mioko
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comment Commented on: Thu Dec 23, 2004 @ 08:36pm
you have great writing abilities 3nodding


comment Commented on: Thu Dec 30, 2004 @ 03:33pm
God Bliss! How long did it take you to do that?



Shooa
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