Okay basically i had this wierd dream and i was wondering if it sounded like a good idea for a book...ideas with it please?
Forgive my spelling...
The band finished their act, the poor queen seemed withdrawn a small amount of food and drool slid down her chin. A young servant wiped it away.
Each band member was introduced to the dieing queen, she gave each a favor. 10 memebers of the large band were given clear bracelets and the rest the regular pins.
The fairest of the group (name i need one still) smiled happily she was exstic meeting the queen and being givin a favor it was amazing. She started walking later the evening through the streets, the smells the people it was overwhellming.
She heard a few shots and ducked in fear. What was going on she wondered in panic then hid in an aclove near by. A gard followed her and started to chase her, he thought she had done that!
She ran farther into the aclove and realized it wasn't an aclove but a tunnel, up ahead were to people kissing. She made a sharp turn into another tunnle and hid in a small space there a real aclove she though. The gard imideatly had the two lovers arrested, he started down the tunnel she had hid and slyly she tried to slip away behind him. Somehow he knew and grabed her leg. The gard threw her against a wall. It wasn't a wall!
She was tumbling, finally she landed right on a table! She was in the royal Kitchens! Once again she took off finding an unlocked door she hid in the room panting. A voice starteled her.
Turning around gultily she came face to face with non other than the queen herself!
"Hello favored one." The queen said in a sad distant voice.
"Hello my queen." She curtisied.
"Welcome to my room." they talked for some time and the queen in her sad voice told of how she wished it would rain soon in her blessed kingdom.
"I could fix that!" She said with a smile. Jumping up she quickly walked over to the window, but not paying attention to were her feet were going she fell in to the gap between the widow and the rest of the room. She fell several stories only to have her life saved by the cloths of golden thread with candles (unlit thank god). When she finally landed on solid ground there was door near her right that led to the outside.
Stepping outside she started to cast a rain spell when her
purse fell into a deep pond next to her. She dove after it. fighting her left arm she swam deeper and deeper, her air was gone now and she wanted to breath so much. Finally she had her purse in her hand, she rose to the surface and with her last ounce of strength she cast the spell for rain.
She woke to the sound of rain on a window pane, there was the queen sitting near her.
"Thank you, favored one. You did well. I know I chose well. Your bracelet saved your life. You are now destined to save my home world favored one."
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i am thinking to just have the main charcter be the only one to get the bracelet...what do you guys think?
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