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This poem was meant to be for my english homework and it really hard to rhyme the last words of each sentence. While i have to write sonnet poem, i have to use iombic pertameter. Its 10 lines with even numbered syllable stress accented. Its like making a song but its really hard. I failed it but it was worth extra credit. All of this wasnt a quote that i was supposed to but He liked it though....for me, i think its a fail. I like it but i dont like how it fit into the assignment



a little heart who sad, cries all day long
its loneiness and depression bring tears
where pain and its miserable comes along
the chilly breeze brings an usual odd air
a sparkly pink petals flows in the sky where it heart goes shall seek its shattered dreams.
where it heart goes shall seek its shattered dreams
this path im walking now with a goodbye
precious memories that would not let me scream
cold hard hands would not warm my little heart
and quiet voice can not bring joy and its light
how long will time wait before it restart
it can not wait not will try to hold tight
although it lost its own greatest full love
I still believe it will come from the above