Brilliant brilliant brilliant brilliant... i cant even say how brilliant this
story is becoming... except thats its becoming so brilliant im finding it hard
to type something i havent already said...
Fav scene has to be the closing scene it just so wrought with action and
suspense i could barely take my eyes off the screen. Fav character of the
chapter has to be Jameel. well its still really a toss between jameel and dessy but Jameel for me stood out by far in this chapter as the best. His need to get revenge on Kadin and still protect his novice/s is the best part ever
Personal conflict is the best way for a character to
flourish in my opinion.
I cant wait to read the next installment. Congrats on a brilliant story as of
yet. I hope this will last for a long while yet. smile
Silver Nephil Community Member 
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