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MizukiChou-Chan
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Posted: Tue May 17, 2011 @ 10:08pm

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	hey Once upon time. Their was cheerful girl name MizukiChou-Chan was born in a world that is not love; but one day their was couple who like this cheerful girl. She have no family or friend when she was born. That is way the little girl was so happy that the couple took her in their family. When the young girl grow up she full in love name Neko. He was handsome and smart. MizukiChou-Chan want Neko to full in love with her so she did somethng unthinkabel. She kill Neko and toke his heart so she can have his heart forever. The young Neko become a gost; but Neko didn't know and he full in love with young girl name MizukiChou-Chan. His gost become sad spirt because the girl he love didn't say anything no one did.The girl didn't know he was their and he had become a gost. The girl still in her room with cold ice heart with her. One day when she become so sad she sow the gost she had love and killed. The gost of Neko sow MizukiChou-Chan looking at him. he become happy once agean. untile next MizukiChou-Chan OUT!!!

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Hinastukino
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Commented on: Tue May 17, 2011 @ 10:24pm


	it sounds interesting. you have to work on the spelling and the grammar though.

Commented on: Wed May 18, 2011 @ 08:24pm


	So the story contine. MizukiChou-Chan was happy because she see her love on agean. Neko was happy because MizukiChou-Chan sow her. Then one day Neko sow a cold heart in her hand and Neko ask why she have cold heart in her hand. MizukiChou-Chan didn't say anything but; Neko want to now so bad he ask her everyday why she have cold heart in her hand. Then one day she give up and till him it was his heart and she had kill him. Neko was shock, then he saw is past about what happen when Neko was having a brithday party and then all he know he got block out by something. Then when Neko wake up. He feel werm and wet on his body, it was his blood. Neko start to cry and say why did you kill me i didn't do anything and you sayed you love me so why? MizukiChou-Chan have no anwear for him all she can do was stid still. Neko when out and MizukiChou-Chan cry silenty in the night. Well Neko come back who know and what well MizukChou-Chan say if he come back. MizukChou-Chan OUT!! untile next time lady and gentelmen. 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding

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