Xelyn_X13 Wrote:
BobCatHOH Wrote:
Xelyn_X13 Wrote:
BobCatHOH Wrote:
OK, this is not a regular assignment, it is a fix of a page that was completed.
This is the page as it stands now.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/bobcathoh/HKSS%20manga/wip/shinobu115.jpg This is the script so you know what is going on:
Quote:
Scene: People walking down the church's main walkway.
Shinobu walks up to a man standing next to a pew, gives him a pocket watch.
Shinobu: Your son wanted me to give you that watch.
Man: My son? *opens watch* *sees a picture of the boy with him in it* You've seen my son?
Shinobu: Yes, he's over here *points to an empty pew*
Shinobu: !!!! Where did he go?
Man: My son died almost a year ago, in a car accident. He must have brought this watch back to me so I'd know he was OK."
Shinobu has a shocked expression on her face.
These are the fixes needed:
1) Top left: Shinobu walks up to a pew. That's where the father is standing.
2) The little boy looked like this:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/bobcathoh/HKSS%20manga/mangapage114part2.jpg The father should look like an older version of him:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/bobcathoh/HKSS%20manga/mangapage116.jpg So in all the panels where the father appears, just change his hairstyle to look like the kid's.
This is how the assignment works:
1) I give you a page of script. You ask questions, I answer them.
2) You give me a sketch.
3) I then comment.
4) You implement the comments, and give me a final drawing.
5) If it passes, I give you payment (usually 90% pass on the first one, sometimes they have to be re-edited)
6) You then have a chance for another page, if u want.
When can you get me the initial sketch?
I'm sorry but I don't fix other peoples work. could I skip this assignment?
Fine. Redraw this page then.
alright then. I'll try to have it to you within a week.
Awesome. Remember, make sure the father looks like an older version of the son.
Xelyn Craft · Sat Apr 10, 2010 @ 04:52am · 0 Comments
