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a bit of me all in a little book.. living in a big world.. within a mest up life.... what's not to look at? its just me... v_v

x_Sweet_Demonic_Dreams_x
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Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 @ 05:46pm

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	lights off.... turn off the lights turn around for i see no fright cant see a thing in the mid of night gonna go towards the light see if things look so bright try and find the difference in day or night for i turned off the lights turned around and saw no fright thought things would be alright didnt appeal as i thought for the lights are off,and i tried to find the light at night i see no light for i got no right to try and find my knight one thats brings me light [ TO BE CONTINUED!!! ] i love the beat i have going ^^ heart i know its not the best i was just having a moment i have work to do with it -.-'

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Ix-Sasuke-Uchiha-xI
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Fri Jul 10, 2009 @ 07:41pm

i like it ^^

xX_invisible me_Xx
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Fri Jul 10, 2009 @ 10:07pm

ok um i se what ur going at but try not to make everything rhyme with light try other words (constructive criticism)

Curse of A Poetic Lunatic
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Fri Jul 10, 2009 @ 10:40pm

I really like ^^ I can't wait to see what it will look like when it's finished. ^^

ii_MistressPeaches
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Tue Jul 14, 2009 @ 07:23pm

O.O
meh likies
^^
keep it up
an yes... i agree with one dude there.... other rhyming words like with thought in ur poem

for i turned off the lights
turned around and saw no fright
thought things would be alright
didnt appeal as i thought
for the lights are off,and i tried to find the light in turn which was not brought

just example... then u'd crayyin on threw with other words...
sry if i sound like an a**...
for i thought id give u an easy pass...
so then unto which u may
find the rite words to say
becuz i kno the how to sway
and to mess around with what little words are gay (happy.... not.. u kno...)
life has not enough time
for use to whine
but to help
when all i can think for a rhyming word is KELP

wow sry lol

~hold my hand... take me away... let me see the world today~

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