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thoughs i hear in my head lone in the dark
ok this is my thoughs what i feel how things have been in my life i will try to post more freaquently but things latly havn't been alright so if you want to know me cheack on this every day and see what i say you just might find out what you want to
last wish a poem i wrote
Last wish

I am a butterfly
I don’t stay long
For I used all but one wish
I ceased his jaw line
With a simple stroke of my hand

I spread my wings
I saw his pain
It welled inside of him
Slowly eating away his life

Would I do this?
Give my last wish for someone
I don’t even love
I saw the live of him leaving

The pain he was in
The things he has suffered
He lay in this white room
Suffering but not for long

I was his wish to live
But I don’t even love him
I was a wish wasn’t I
A fable a myth

I am a butterfly
I don’t stay long
For I use my last wish
For someone today who’s in pain?

I will fade if I use this wish
But I known that
It would hurt him more
To wake to only be alone

But I will be reborn
Given 6 more wishes
Never to know him again

The sun shone threw my wings
Like an angle
As I used my last wish
To spare this boys live
Slowly I looked around
Then at my wings
And slowly I faded

“I love you”
I whispered my last breath
Before I disappeared
I am a butterfly
I don’t stay long
At all


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  • User Comments: [1]
    I really like the concept of this poem. It's got this suttle hint of emotion, but if you read in further you can really see it^^

    comment Alibis of the Heart · Community Member · Sat Apr 18, 2009 @ 02:44am
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