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thoughs i hear in my head lone in the dark
ok this is my thoughs what i feel how things have been in my life i will try to post more freaquently but things latly havn't been alright so if you want to know me cheack on this every day and see what i say you just might find out what you want to
ok i am trying something diffrent today i am posting a story
BLOOD WOUNDS
Tonight of all nights i walk this dark path, no i don't mind it. It's all i can stand any more. A time to clear my thoughts. Out of the corner of my left eye I saw somthing hit the ground rather hard.
A girl could it be?!?! So as i walked over she looked like a heep on the ground. This poor girl lay not 2 feet in front of me. Not only that but on the solid damp ground. Her clothes tatterd and torn, her black hair tangled to the point that it would break a brush. Hot tears streamed down her almost glowing face.
Thats only when i noticesed her bruises around her wrists and face.
God this girl by the age of sixteen or less had been atacked. By now i was thinking vile thoughts to the thing that did this to her. Her voice crackled and almost faded with the wind, but i caught every word she said
"please just please take me some where" she said in a hushed voice
(* ok so that was the guys point of view next part to the story is the girls point of veiw of the things that happend next so enjoy*)
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he picked me up and i grunted in pain
"m- my forarm it burns" i bearly choked out
He tore the shirt away from my forarm to reveail on set of fanged marks. When he opend his mouth under the dim light of the new moon i saw two enlonged gleaming fangs.
"w-wh-what are you doing" i shook violently
"hold still kid this wont take long but the venonm is in you" he wispered in my right ear
"venom" i shreiked as he bit into my wound
"please stop i can't take much more blood loss" i begain to slur badly now
"plese" i said before i blacked out once more
fadeing in the arms of my saver or my only destroyer.....


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  • User Comments: [1]
    I like it!!!!!! whee
    You must write more!!! 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding

    comment Alibis of the Heart · Community Member · Sun Apr 12, 2009 @ 02:50am
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