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Enter the world of my thoughts.
A mixture of poetry,philopshphy,and also drawing and rememberances.
Tear Drops (poem) (with version 2 this time)
Right when I awake from my sleeping
in the early morning,I awake with
eyes that have teardrops desending
from them,and see the colors through
out the atmosphere with blurry
vision,my first thought in the morning
is of you,and the negative affect that
got thrown on my life cos of your
actions.


version 2

Right when I awake from my sleeping time,
I awake with eyes that have teardrops
desending,from them then I feel the
heat of the tear drop rolling in a downward
position down my cheeks,and then
my vision of the objects that surround
are seen through blurry visions with
a mixture of micellanious colors.


(Copyrighted by fishyseaz v2,
using this poem and then saying
you wrote yourself is against the law,
and can get you thrown in jail,and also
sued)

(This is fishyseaz in another account cos,that account got hacked and then the hacker
got me banned.)


(All critisism is allowed)

(Please tell me ways to improve)
(I may be adding another improved version
so please check back)]


fishyseaz V2
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