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Missing You
By: Me

In broad daylight under a tree,
sun and shadow dappling me,
children playing gleefully on a swingset
I'm quite sure I havnt stopped mising you yet

The waning moon is pretty
something to see and want to collect
I gaze at the stars so sparkly
Still i havny stopped missing you yet

My minds thoughts are filled with you
simple conversations replaying in my head
I smile in hopes i see you tomorrow
But i havnt stopped missing you yet

I widh you were laying next to me
the grass isnt too wet
The stars are gracefully shimmering
And i havnt stopped missing you yet

I sit in my place and think
i cant believe its been only a week
But i leave some thoughts incomplete
well i havnt stopped missing you yet

Weve been found out by my mother
But its not something i regret
she says we can still be together!!
And if we couldnt, i still wouldnt have stopped missing you yet

It would seem another day has passed
i hope this bad feeling doesnt last
When you read this dont forget
I honestly havnt stopped missing you yet

The longest poem ive ever written, if i remember right.
9 stanzas, one for each day i didnt get to talk to max.
im happy i didnt have to write 10! {i was about to kill something if i didnt talk to max, and also i was running out of paper}

Its not that great really, too much reptition in my opinion.