oki i made a poem in 2nd and i kno it needs work. so give me some pointers and tips and yatta yatta if ya can ^^ thanks a bunch!!!! i gess... *twitch*
here it is:
My Suicide
Life or death, who will survive?
Stay awake, to stay alive.
Or go to sleep,
And take the very life you barely keep.
Use a razor or a rope.
If there isn't any hope.
So take your leave with one sweet blow.
And let your soul go with the flow.
For no one will ever know.
Till the end of your show.
Life or death, my suicide.
Will you stay alive to play?
To play your own, little special game.
Or will you die, my suicide?
To leave us here.
To not survive.
Till the day we all die.
We will be there, for yours to cry.
Cause we love you.
MY SUICIDE! heart
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