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The MIRROR (final)
The MIRROR-------- FINAL exclaim exclaim eek question
We ran up the stairs from someone wearing a mask...... we didn't know who it was but we thought it was a... killer.....
We hid in the bathroom... ... we both saw Terra in the tub..
The bathroom got smaller and smaller.... footsteps coming closer...closer.... smaller and smaller.....
I hit the mirror and my hand had blood on it...... it stepped away from the mirror.......
~~~~SOMEWHERE IN THE PAST~~~~~ 4laugh NIGHT TIME
*Runs* "Oh... Peter... where are you going?" asked Jane
"I'm going to see the Princess.... she told me to go there..."
"Oh... may I come?"
"Oh yes you may..."
"Peter....."
"Yes?"
"Ummm...."
"Oh we're here right?"
"Umm yes...."
"Great...!"
"Just go through that door... and stairs to the Princess..."
"Okay..." *OPENS DOOR*
=====After the long journey up the stairs====
*PANTS* "Who does put a long stair in a tower??!!" said Peter
*pants* "yeah.... who does..."
*knocks up big door*
"Who is it?" asked The Princess..
"Me... Peter..."
"Oh great!!!" *opens door* "Hello... Peter... oh and you.. Jane...."
"Hello Princess...." said Jane
"No..no... please call me Hope....." said The Princess.. I mean Hope...
"Well what do want Hope..?" asked Peter...
"Well.. I want to show you a beautiful mirror that the King bought me..."
"Oh..."
"It's in my bath... place.... I'm not so sure what's it's called...."
"Umm okay.."
*ALL WALKS TO BATH... PLACE...*
"See how pretty it is!!" said Hope
"Yes.. it's so nice..." said Jane
"yes.. yes... very pretty..."
"Some old hag told me that it had magical powers in it... but she's an old hag... I don't really care if it has magics...." said Hope
*footsteps*
"Oh NO!!! who could be coming at this hour!!" said Hope
"Huh..." said Peter
"I guess lets hide!!"
"Lock the door!!"
*smashes mirror* "OW!!" screamed Jane..
+++++Back to the...... present past??? burning_eyes
A hand popped out and grabbed Ms. Shedd...... she screamed... Dan grabbed her and Terra grabbed Dan... they all were pulled into the mirror......
=====Umm past==== and present past--
Blood was on the floor... bodies of three people layed... no one knows how the died....But do you??.......
A man, two women.... suddenly appeared on the face of Earth with memories of the past and a death wish......
=====THE END======
COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!


Frogstar B
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  • User Comments: [1]
    blaugh Ty for reading this!!!! sweatdrop biggrin that really makes me happy plz comment if you wish... and tell me errors or anything... Cuz xd I wanna know if it's bad and how I can improve!!! lol But first.... the next story I'll do would be a holiday one! because of the holidays I feel very jolly 4laugh It's about a Elf....... Lol.... so the Elf falls in love with a young man with a dream... but plz... I'm not trying to ruin x-mas or the holidays.... but tell me what you think.. but I have two that are in question confused whee soo here they are!!
    Dark X-mas---
    A girl tries to ruin x-mas cuz she likes halloween better.... Black santa hats, black everything almost... who will save X-mas?...
    heart Jolly Heart heart
    A Elf girl who owns a candy shop.... she falls for a devilish boy.... but could a jolly elf and unjolly devilish boy be together for ever?!?
    WHAT DO YOU THINK OF THESE TWO??? heart I just made that up just now lol!!!!!! really... thats how I type stories up here.... but I do brainstorm xd and get ideas from the real life.... my feelings...stuff I wanna do..... and events biggrin
    After those stories I'll make a new story called The KITE.... which if you read The SHED then you would know what it is and it also is a continuation of The MIRROR.... cool my plan is going very very well... rolleyes biggrin COMMENT PLZZ mrgreen

    comment Frogstar B · Community Member · Mon Dec 15, 2008 @ 03:59am
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