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What's the big deal?
He dumped you, so what?
You sing a sad song
and write worse words
You portray the way you feel...
with verbal vomit.
Pour out your broken heart
onto an empty page.
So what?
Some people think, "Hey! She can WRITE!"
I bet this makes you feel smart.
But, anyone with an artist's keen eye can see
it's just a bunch of verbal vomit.
It makes me feel SICK
to think that anyone could be so THICK
as to THINK that what you wrote was a work of ART.
I knew right away that your "words from the heart"
were only a huge chunk of disgusting verbal vomit.
A REAL writer knows that this is an art
to produce poetry you need some time and some smarts
Rewrite, after rewrite, after rewrite...
And there! It's not perfect.
But it's a good start.
But, I beg you, PLEASE!
For the sake of art,
produce something more then worthless verbal vomit!
 nangal · Wed Dec 10, 2008 @ 06:00am · 0 Comments |
